I liked the narrative with the walking "monk" - that was very well done (well, except for where it focused on one of his buttons - as an alliteration to "the least of these"?),
The text message was good, but the surrounding material had too much "glitz" to it, and was distracting.
Looks good. But I would have left out the voice reading the scriptures. He didn't read with the same kind of drama as the music, which created a disconnect for me.
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The background music to the powerpoint is very distracting; whatever happened to silence?
I liked the narrative with the walking "monk" - that was very well done (well, except for where it focused on one of his buttons - as an alliteration to "the least of these"?),
The text message was good, but the surrounding material had too much "glitz" to it, and was distracting.
Looks good. But I would have left out the voice reading the scriptures. He didn't read with the same kind of drama as the music, which created a disconnect for me.
Other than that, well done!
kgp
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